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I've said i loved you and i'll say it again

I've said i loved you and I'll say it again
Because i know right now we both need a friend
When your words are lost and you don't know what to say
Just know I'll be here holding your hand through the day.
and I'll think of you all night
Wondering why we cant get this love thing right
Did I do something wrong?
It's like we cant ever hit the right notes in this boring love song
The lines are all right and the words are all there
but through out the day silence is all i hear
With that funny look in your eye and the smile you lack
I think you'll give up and just turn back.
When you ignore my three little words and just say goodnight
my insides start bleeding and i loose all my site
I don't want you to go
the only thing i want you to know is i love you and just have faith and never let go.


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Written October 24th, 2005

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  • guynn
    October 24, 2005
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    I can merely say *smile* to this. I like this a lot.