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Please Don't Say That

If you were to say to me
A simple compilation
Of words
That would create an end
You know how I would feel.

The streams and rivers
Would slide down
The cracks
And crevices which
Thunder rolls as tears fall

Of course I'll understand
Not only is
It probably
But most likely
Will it happen.

Until the, let us make
The best of it.
For never again
Will it be this good,
For me.

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Written October 24th, 2005

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