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Sickness of LIFE

The sickness that sits inside you feeling all pain to your heart wishing you didn't make that mistake of the sickness to kill everything that is good to you
friends can only help with half of your problems but they cant fix what they didn't create they cant create somethings so bad that it
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you slowly until everything that was good turned into something no one wants


Author notes

This is to my friend who is sick from Cervix cancer,,,,
Written October 24th, 2005

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  • Sandygram
    November 3, 2005
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    This is such a heartfelt poem. I am so sorry you friend is going through such an ordeal. You are a wonderful friend to be there for her. That must be so hard on you. I will say a prayer for both of you. God Bless you Desarae. love ya, grma!!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 31, 2005
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    goodness I am so sorry hope things soon get better,don't know what else to say but good luck..Linda

  • MichelleLynn
    October 31, 2005
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    Hey this is awesome... i know how ur feeling... If you ever wanna talk hun, im here...
    Awesome poetry!
    Love ya'z
    Shellie


  • cake
    October 28, 2005
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    This is so sad and cancer is something none of us can accept.
    Let us hope medecine will soon find a cure to this terrible disease. IT IS GREAT TO HEAR FROM YOU AGAIN. CAKE


  • Dloz88
    October 26, 2005
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    KILL

    Awesome poem des.


  • eternalpoet
    October 25, 2005
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    3 Stars ***

    dear.. i am really sorry to know about your friend

    i think i talked to you about this before... i cant talk on it more.. .. I Hope everything gets better ....

    nice write...... good work............ thanks for sharing my dear friend

    *hugs and kisses*

    *gives choco *

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend ............................ just keep it up ........................... your humble little friend ........................... ..................................... ............................ ............................. - vic ( who else????? )


  • aRdNeK
    October 24, 2005
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    Aww, I'm sorry to hear about your friend. I can't say I've been in this situation before, but I have worried greatly about a dear friend, just in a different situation. Anyway, very powerful and emotional write and I hope things get better for you. Great job! Keep up the amazing work!

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