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October's Child.. (Silver)


To a very special person
here's a birthday wish
all the health and happiness
placed on a silver dish

Some may think it’s just a day
and just like all the rest
but for us that know you-
this day is truly blessed

October’s child is made of love
and of courage and of strength
october’s child is steadfast
and stretches to any lengths

Never has there been a time
that you were not around
to nudge me back upon my path
or to keep me on the ground

Happy Birthday Patty
enjoy your special day
you deserve all the good
that God can send your way


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Written October 24th, 2005

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  • Huntress silver member
    October 30, 2005
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    Congratulations


  • fourth coming
    October 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much Sis and I send you all my love Patty

  • unbroken5
    October 25, 2005
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    sweet, kind

    what a wonderful poem dedicated to the day a friend or loved one was born i enjoyed reading it, LOVENTUTU/LOVE INSPIRES ME

  • Group - Roggies
    October 25, 2005
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    Oh what a beautiful birthday poem for this special person.
    The background is so festive, perfect for your words.
    Thank you for the entry and good luck in the contest

  • Warrior7
    October 25, 2005
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    This is a beautiful birthday poem, birthday poems are always a treasure to recieve as i found out not long ago myself it made me feel like i was so damn special and so i hope that Patty feels special after reading her birthday poems.
    Loved this very much ,you are a true poet


  • FifthDove
    October 24, 2005
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    ((shhhhhhh)) 53


  • queen Moderators member
    October 24, 2005
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    This is an awesome poem. I know she will love it. How old is Patty anyway?


  • FifthDove
    October 24, 2005
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    Thank you Dawnknight for your lovely comment


  • FifthDove
    October 24, 2005
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    Thank you very much Lora


  • Dawnknight
    October 24, 2005
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    I enjoyed this alot it pushed out the sadness that this month will now have for the rest of my life to remind me that my sister was born in this month as well. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

  • Lora
    October 24, 2005
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    I like the party atmosphere of your background and the flashing title. Very creative. The poem is a great tribute to a friend that any person would be honored to receive. I like the rhyme, the line length, and the verse length. They all conribute to a good poem. God bless, Lora

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