house on the lake stands alone
why are windows shut?
why live there?
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Written October 24th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Wanted Quainzaine Form Poems by Vickie J.
300 points, ended October 25, 2005, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I've always wanted to live by a lake. I hoped this poem give a little mystery, but gives a since longing to be there. Thank you for niciest comment and liking my poem. Haley27
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Has a sad, forlorn feel to it...indeed why have a place when you can't enjoy the atmosphere it can provide...Thanks for this entry and best wishes in the contest!~vj
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