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A Masterpiece

Upon paper I place my pen
Awaiting the words that flutter about my head
Buried deep beneath the protective walls I keep
Through the chaos they will seep
Spilling into puddles of artistic poetry
Expressing my passions and desires
Or perhaps all my fear and regrets
Even a suicidal thought may trickle through
You never really know, It all depends on my mood
Nonetheless they form a masterpiece
Hung on the walls of AP for all to see

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Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • Celticmoon
    October 28, 2005
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    Desire,
    My dear lady....
    A comment from you is a pleasure and an honor. Your words are loving and inspiring. You have a heart of gold that shines so bright. Bless you dear you and thank you for your comment

  • Celticmoon
    October 28, 2005
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    Artis, you my dear, can make any poet blush with your sweet and kind comments. Your comments are as lovely to read as your writes themself. Thank you much.....


  • Celticmoon
    October 28, 2005
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    Thank you so much Carrie for your kind words. I do so appreciate all you offer.

  • Celticmoon
    October 28, 2005
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    Nowe don't we all have fun when we are reading and writing poetry? Glad you liked this piece my dear lady. Thank you for your sweet words.


  • Celticmoon
    October 27, 2005
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    Oh my dear Knight you are just so sweet. Thank you for your kind words.


  • Gentle Bear
    October 27, 2005
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    Through the chaos they will seep
    Spilling into puddles of artistic poetry

    Uhuh! Yup! That would be a good description of poetry! Very lovely, celticmoon!


  • Desire gold member
    October 24, 2005
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    Beautiful

    ...
    Whoa!!...Each time you put that pen to paper...
    YOU are creating a masterpiece...
    Each person has their own definition of masterpiece...
    What it consists of...
    This is such one ...a prized possession of emotions
    Awesome job sweetie~
    Thank you for sharing this with us~
    Desire


  • artis
    October 24, 2005
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    a gallery of thoughts, in full display as we read the minds of aritists at work and are then inspired to paper the walls as well, what better fate then this at times when moods swing and we get butterflies from the tipsy headiness of the written flow......Artis


  • Sunkissedrose
    October 24, 2005
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    Very raw, very good and very you. Your works deservedly so to be hung along these walls, and anyone who reads you, will come away with what ever emotion you are trying to convey.
    ~Carrie


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 24, 2005
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    very nice and so filled with emotions.. love your choice of words good for..keep penning and I shall return to read,have fun as I believe you do.. Linda


  • Vorondwen gold member
    October 23, 2005
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    Hee hee...I love it! So simple, but so full of meaning. I enjoyed the imagery.
    "Awaiting the words that flutter about my head
    Buried deep beneath the protective walls I keep"


  • Fragile Monster
    October 23, 2005
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    lol awesoem... i liked the ending added a little giggle.. but then again it went deep in the begainign and middle.. nice write

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