- You can't see the scars;
Covered up by sleeves of guilt;
And nobody can imagine the hurt;
That's behind the wall she's built.
- You can't see the bruising;
Hidden under layers of shame;
And you can't feel the fists;
That cause her daily pain.
- You can't see her crying;
Those lonely crimson tears;
And you haven't seen her suffering;
Through the past nineteen years.
- You don't see her shivering;
Under the blankets, laced with lies;
And you can't feel the stinging;
That pulses deep beyond her eyes.
- You can't see the colors;
That are spread across her face;
And you can't stop her fighting;
To get out of this horrid place.
- You can only offer her;
What you think she needs;
"I am fine, every things okay"
But inside - look - she bleeds.
[You all think you're heroes]
[But you just make it worse]
Author notes
This is so pathetic. I just wanted to carry on my trend of stupid, moronic, 12 year old emo poetry. 
Though the last two lines in "[ ]" I actually mean.
-Elegantly Wasted and such-
(
Kayla, hehe.)
Written October 23rd, 2005
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wow you just write one amazing thing after another. this was brlliant. you really do have some spectacular talent. Always look forward to reading more
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This was really freakin' good!!!!!! I like how you transformed the heroes into really the one that is hurting her, know what i mean, or does that not make sense? LOL! i have a tendency to do that. I like how you had like sleves, and blankets to me they seemed like a symbol then you weaved in sham and guilt. i thought that, that was ver clever and unique. The last two lines gave me chills, i loved this poem so much high fiver fo' shizzle LOL
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you are veryy welcome sweetness.
<33KAYLA
(MISS INXS)
and love you 2 -
Fanks heartness.
<333Kalah.
[And such.]
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Well done Miss Elegantly Wasted and Such. :)
OMG... sweetie. this is amazing. so emo, but yeah the last 2 stanzas i could tell you really meant them. thats where all the emotion came in. its a GREAT write. and it was easy to read, it was just really amazing. amazing job.
<33KAYLA
((Elegantly Wasted and such)) hehe
thats greatness.. i love you!!!!!! -
Dang!!! Girl, written emotion I feel
as I read. I cry and weep thinking
how many did I hurt believing I helped.
Excellent well done poem, write on.
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Yeah I guess I've changed a bit since I wrote this - But yes; In general alot of people are like this.
Thanks for the comment
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wow this is quite dark deep and powerful...and also very sad
i'm sorry you feel that way abt people but you know...it's kinda true
awesome write, keep i up
janie
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wow that was really nicely done Kalah.. as I got you with the last two lines in "[ ]" , It was really sad piece and i feel you a lil angry on the last two lines too i dont know maybe Im wrong. Powerful and beautiful done.
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Auu Babe *Hearts a Million Trillion* <333.
Don't include yourself in this. You do nothing but help me and i'll forever love you for that.
- Loves yoo.
**Kalah. -
I'm sorry Kalah, I try so much.... I just guess.. I'm not good enough... I'm so sorry.... I'll see you around...
~Steph~
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wow this was amazing!! I liked the rhyming, it flowed really well keep it up x x x
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Wow sawk! This is brilliant
It holds a lot of power, some things I can relate to especially the ending. Beautifully written, I hope everythings fine. Keep it up
--Iluvoo.
♥
~Lana Sawk.
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