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Lady Scorpio Phoenix Rising

Grace and balance in her step,
as Phoenix Rises from regrets.
Fallen to the bottomless depths,
in pyred fires deepest lament.

From the ash of efforts total lost,
new awakenings arise in trusted force.
Infinite wisdom's lessons learned,
a quest for knowledge within her burns.

Cause and effect the name of the game,
through the fires burning wisdom is gain.
Life to her a quested harsh journey seasoned,
a cavalcade of life's reason she's appealing.

To fathom it's depths and sheer it's heights,
to know and see it wrong and rights.
If life's too short to take it all in,
she will return and start it all over again.

She is a loner on this you can depend,
traveling in places needing a mend.
She can be your light and one you might know,
if she does trust you,this Lady Scorpio.


      ~~~Suseann~~~~


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image credit Marilyn Radzat(Scorpio  Rising)
Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • Puppydog gold member
    October 24, 2005
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    VERY BEAUTIFUL

    Beautiful poem dear friend; Your words always find their way to my heart.


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    October 23, 2005
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    Wonderful job ! Wonderful wonderful suseann. This is so YOU! And just an interesting note. I don't know why I did this but I read it once, then I read it backwards...just the stanzas backwards. It sounded even better for me that way (Don't ask, you know I can be wierd sometimes). Way to go lady scorpio!

    ~Lyrical