Make the words go away
make him stop
please
"Whore. You know your a slut."
"Your Just a fat bitch."
I'm begging you
can't you see me balled up in this corner
can't you see my tears
can't you see my blood stained arms
I came to him for help
why didn't he help me
why didn't he stop hurting me
make him stop hurting me
come and hold me
please
cant you hear me
why aren't you answering me
I cant feel you anymore
where are you
I can't loose you too
please don't leave me
I need to feel your fingers wiping away my tears
I need to feel the warmth of your breath on my cheek
I need you
I need you to tell me one thing
who are you?
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I know its crap, but i got an idea and went with it, and just started typing... ohwel.
Written October 23rd, 2005
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Any time hun, and thanks for your comment too. and the applause. lol. Take care. ~Kiersten~
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Wow! That was very deep.I could feel the emotion.I loved it...great job! Its not crap! I love it! Thanks for commenting on my poem.
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and thanks for being such a loyal reader!
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heh, thanks sweetie, ill try!
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This is not crap I love it just like i love every other poem you write! Have confidence in your writes!!
~*~Kate~*~
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