Come, dance with me my love
Give yourself to me like to none you have before
Let my touch caress the very essence of your soul
Upon a silver cloud of loving passion
Your every desire shall I fulfill
Mapping out uncharted flesh
With the most delicate of touches
Filling your every sexual need
Raising your passions to soar
Far beyond any level known to man
We shall make the angels rejoice
As our love combines in unbridled bliss
The ground shall quake around the globe
As our bodies erupt with a volcanic explosion
So much I offer to you for the taking
If you simply......
Let me be your every fantasy
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Written October 23rd, 2005
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A beautiful poem.
What amazing poem! I truly enjoyed it..Thank you for sharing it with me. The imagery was mind boggling..... -
Thank you ever so much for your kind comment. I do so appreciate the time you have taken to read and comment on my work.
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Your well chosen wprds fit the image perfectly. You did a great job of combining the two and keeping them in-sync. Things don't always work out this was. Your poem is very soft, hopeful and romantic, filled with all that anyone could hope and wish for. Great job!
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Wonderful picture, lovely verse - how wonderful to have all our fantasies catered to and made true. IF onely...
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Very beautiful and romantic. How lovely to have a fantasy offered like that. I thought you have written this well and I liked it very much. Thank you for sharing it. The picture is very beautiful also.
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Amazingly beautiful! I love the imagery. Very tasteful and deep. I love how you concluded with
"So much I offer to you for the taking
If you simply......
Let me be your every fantasy". Perfect ending.
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