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The touch of a concrete rose

The concrete rose one of a kind
Its beauty can never faid

The smell of a concrete rose will never go away
The touch of a concrete rose will never change

All the things you love about a concrete rose will remain the same
A concrete rose will never wilt away or die

Let every thing around you be more like a concrete rose
Some things only die because you let them

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Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • lenedreams
    October 24, 2005
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    i love the message and depth of this write in it's thought provoking simplicity. good luck in my contest


  • greeneyedmuse
    October 23, 2005
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    interesting. i liked how this was written in couplets, giving each stanza a sort of individual thought feeling. i liked the last stanza, very powerful. great write and keep up the great work. good luck in the contest.
    ~sammy