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Plop, Plop, Plop!!

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Little pigeon flying so high
dropping splatter from the sky
doesn't care where it drops
all day long plop plop plop

Splatter here a splatter there
on your shoe and in your hair
on the bench in the park
he takes aim to hit his mark

Drops his splatter on a duck
little duck was out of luck
sticky feathers start to stink
so much splatter he might sink

The duck rolls over on his back
gives an angry quack quack quack
in the water rolling all round
now clean he quacks a happy sound

Some splatter fell upon the zoo
hit the monkeys and the llamas too
beast of burdens were really mad
that pigeon had been so very bad

Rain fell down and washed away
all the splatter dropped that day
it even washed the llama's hair
the duck swam without a care

The pigeon sat in his pigeon coop
which was covered with pigeon poop
sat waiting for the rain to stop
then fly and go plop plop plop



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Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    February 13, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Oh thank you very much for the wonderful comment. It is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy ;f
  • ian sawicki silver member
    February 13, 2006
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    hehehe well i live about 140 feet in the air, the pigeons gather on the ledge outside my windows, plopping away to their heart's content

    waves and goes off to chase the day

  • Arsenic-
    October 27, 2005
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    Oh that is bad. Geeze...you are funny. I got a plop not so long ago...in a convertable. That bird had to have a bomb sight, such aim! LOL, good poem...I question your taste.

    ARSENIC-

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 24, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much for the awesome comment. It is so appreciated dear AP grandson. It is such a pleasure to be your AP grmom. God Bless you Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    October 24, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much for the awesome comment. It is so appreciated dear AP son. It is such a pleasure to be your AP mom. God Bless you Take care, Sandy

  • Autumn Whisper
    October 24, 2005
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    great poem grandma, it's very good, so funny, plop plop plop, lmao,
    nice one, keep up the superb work
    best wishes as always
    grandson
  • misunderstood09
    October 23, 2005
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    holy crap this is so funny its real life what ur talking about !! lol plop plop plop!!nice entry

  • Sharcu gold member
    October 23, 2005
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    LOL LOL LOL! (yes, lots of laughing here) Awesome, awesome job, Mom. This poem is hilarious. Wow! That is so amazing, I can't stop laughing. This is incredible. Thanks so much for brightning my day a little bit. Good luck in the contest!
    --Tim
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