Heart fills with joy
Life filled with happiness
Smile crosses my face
Just by thinking of you.
Soul filled with peace
Feeling of being complete
Knowing I'm accepted
Every time we talk
Making me feel special
Feeling like I belong
Proud to call you my girlfriend
Proud to hold your hand.
Eyes of sparkling blue
Wishing the time would go faster
When that dream of mine
Will finally come true.
By: Sharcu(Tim)
Author notes
This poem was written for my ex-girlfriend, Kelsy, while we were still going out.
Written October 23rd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- 5 options to chose from by smileygurl.
300 points, ended November 11, 2005, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is a really heart-warming poem, your love for this girl is so well faceted, that I am surprised she is your ex-girlfriend. You would have though that she would have been bowled over by this eh? Normally I don't like poems that don't rhyme, but this is one of those exceptions, you are obviously the type of writer who can write non-rhyming poetry that still appeals to me, and that list is very small.
I hope you continue to write poems like this. All the best
Ross -
Awww thats really sweet!!!!!
MEGZ! -
This is a sweet poem! I really liked it! Thank you so much for entering my contest!
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This poem was very sweet and lovely. I really like this poem. keep up the good work and good luck in our contest. ^-^
~Chelsea -
This was a very good poem filled with extremely sweet emotion. It had a lovely flow to it and it really described how she makes you feel. My favorite part was the stanza:
Eyes of sparkling blue
Wishing the time would go faster
When that dream of mine
Will finally come true.
It was a very nice stanza and it brought the poem to a close very nicely. God job and good luck in the contest! -
This was such an amazing poem. Thanks for the comment on mine, I'm deff. working on it, and thanks for the welcome into the fam. God Bless, Destiny
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Oh Tim this is so sweet and loving. You have done the most beautiful job on this and it just means so much to me. I don't need to give you luck for the contest because your poem is amazing and should win. I love you so much and you have done an amazing job. Yes you are right the time til Thursday gets here isn't going by fast enough. I love you.
Kelsy
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