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This Letter I've Written

I've tried to care
I've tried to be someon I'm not
I told you I'd stop
But deep down I knew it was a lie
I know I hurt you
I know I'm worng
I'd tell you I'm sorry
Even when we both knew it untrue
I wanted to be friends
But everything I did was wrong
You'd tell me it was okay
But it wasn't
You told me how you felt
I listened
I didn't understand
But that is how you wanted it to be
I told you how I felt
You said you knew how I felt
But you didn't and you don't
This time I cry
This time I hurt
This time I tried
So I'm sorry to tell you
But I'm ready to say good-bye
Please tell everyone I'm sorry
But it seems you are the one person I'm sorry to the most
I tried to believe it wasn't my fault
But yours
I know now that I am the one to blame
So I'm sorry for lying to you
I'm sorry for hurting you
But I'm mostly sorry for having to leave forever
I hope your life is better
And you don't dwell on what I've done
I can only tell you in this letter I've written
How sorry I am and will ever be
This world has choosen my fate
And it seems my time is now
So I'll burn for eternity as I cry
Only to hope that one day
I can really be forgiven

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Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • blackxbutterfly
    March 12, 2006
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    Thanks, I wrote this one to a friend when we were in a big fight and I liked it after we weren't in a fight so I decided to put it up.


  • depressedmexchick
    February 24, 2006
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    You did a most excellent job on this write. As always I still think that you are a wonderful writer. I can relate to this poem so well right now that its not even close to funny. I am going through a hard time right now, but that is off the subject. You had great imagery and description. I love this poem more than quite a few that i have read on this site. You really know how to capture a person's feelings.
    Great job,
    ~Felicity~


  • Faithless Slave
    January 9, 2006
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    Greatness

    My darling,
    I must,as usual, give you a few helpfull spelling tips. Or rather, remind you that you missed a few.^^;
    "You told me how you felt
    I listed" -listened.
    "But it seems you are the one person I'm sorry to the most
    I tried to velieve it wasn't my fault"-believe.
    "But I'm mostly for having to leave forever
    I hoep your life is better"- mainly sorry, hope.
    Everybody makes mistakes, and typoes. Don't worry about it, I just thought you may wish to know. The poem was really great though. How do you do a thumbs up in numbers or symbols? I have no clue! So...-thumbs up?- Anyhow, love ya.