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something new, and undiscovered

I'll never be the same,
Like a little kid in a candy store,
Like a river running though you.
I hear the voice of you calling
but you make no sound
your the miracle that makes me how i am
reaching out your hand,
grabbing mine
my mind acting in no sort of way i have ever felt
the spark in my eyes
the smile on my face
the way i feel around you
what should i believe in,
every time i think of you
my heart drops
if i don't need you touch
why do i miss you so much
when your gone
the phone rings
my heart always drops,
thinking it could be you
why else could it be
every Fantasy
i had as a child
now come true
i surrender,
at the touch of your hand
this isn't love
just something new, and undiscovered

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Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • slowlycrashing
    October 23, 2005
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    Awww jessica!!!!!!!!!!! i love this =) good job!