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Bits and Peices of Things

even if you could Never love Me, i will Always love You

I hated you for all eternity, but eternity played a trick on me, and it seems I'll love you for all eternity

this pain I fell burns a hole through You

Your tears of pain reflect the world I see

My heart of stone, weeps for your broken heart

In lightness and dark I will find you

Author notes

These are just bits of things I thought of.
Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • Hot goth 101
    October 23, 2005
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    wow. feel ya there. nice poem. hope you really do find that somebody.