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Love me darling

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Love me darling,
Love me free,
Let’s our love to glow,
Like the sunshine from your eyes
‘Cause I love you so.

 

Love me darling,
You are mine,
Like the breath I need,
‘Cause I love you,
This is all indeed.

 

Love me always,
Love me soft,
You are in my heart,
Wish your feelings are the same,
And never will depart.

 

Love me always
Love me free
I will die for you,
For all time in cordial life,
This is all I knew.

 

One day, when our dreams come true
Only thing I know
On your way I’ll follow you
This love will always grow.

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Elvis - Love me tender.
More from Elvis: www.mp3search.ru/album.html?id=25463


Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • Sonja
    December 27, 2005
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    Thank you James. I am always trying to do that. Even than when poem is writen for contest. If I can't feel those "something", playing with words without feelings isn't art. In my opinion this is only a technical effort.
    ~Sonja~


  • Congruence
    December 27, 2005
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    Excellent

    A very sweet and honest piece, I like this a lot, you are so honest in your writing.

    James

  • Sonja
    October 27, 2005
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    Yes, this is very interesting contest. Billie has a great idea. I am not sure that I am going to win, but it was nice to do something different. Thank you for wishing me well.
    ~Sonja~


  • Discordia Lamented
    October 27, 2005
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    I always enjoyed Elis. This makes a good tribute to him and his legacy. You made me smile. Seems an interesting contest. I hope you win.

    DL~


  • Sonja
    October 27, 2005
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    Thank you hun, you are always welcome to my site. I am glad you like it.
    ~Sonja~


  • October 27, 2005
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    oh wow, this is a piece of art, i can relate, so much, it's strange. very nice write, once again.

    Keep it up Friend of Mine.


  • Sonja
    October 26, 2005
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    Thanks Timothy for reading. I am glad that you like it.
    ~Sonja~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 26, 2005
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    Lovely!

    A beautiful tribute indeed! I adore his loving songs that truly stem from his loving heart! Much love to you, and thanks for sharing, I love it!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver

  • Sonja
    October 25, 2005
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    Well, all4uv, I tried to do something different, but, I saw here few great enties. Thank you for good wishes.
    ~Sonja~


  • Eyes Of Rain
    October 24, 2005
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    Good luck in the contest, this is a great entry Sonja. You did an excellent job here.

    ~Sherry~


  • Sonja
    October 24, 2005
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    Thanks to you for reading and kind comment. I was talking you about this poem. Elvis deserved it.
    ~Sonja~

  • mimiagatha
    October 24, 2005
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    thank you sonja for an additional tribute to a performer who still gives me the shivers...

  • Sonja
    October 24, 2005
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    Yes, he realy was, and, if I will have enough time, I will post another one. Yes, he was American with part of Italian blood like me. Thank you for your nice comment and applause.
    ~Sonja~


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    October 23, 2005
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    Another wonderful tribute to a wonderful man. Though he was American through and through, he spoke to people world wide. He changed the face of music as we know it. Bravo Sonja on a great write for the "king".

    Blessed be

    ~~Serenity~~
    Billie Jean

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