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Love should never ryhme

There's the Art Of Love, the science of love,
and a one-way street we call lust,
There's love at first sight, a love of all things,
and a love of those that we trust,
There's young Love, long-lived Love,
and a forced love of those that we must,
There's love-hate, and flowery love,
and a passion as brief as a gust,
There's forbidden love, there's one-sided love,
and love-making skills that can rust,
There's love in the air, there's love from afar,
and love that has bitten the dust,
but, the one love I know, the love that I show,
is the the love of a woman's bust.

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Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • ScarletO gold member
    October 23, 2005
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    hahahahahahhahahah....very funny

  • PoEtiC AsHeS
    October 23, 2005
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    Greatness!

    Haha.. that was great, I was lead to think it was gonna be all deep and then I was laughin my ass off at the end! great!

  • Hidden Girl
    October 23, 2005
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    well done the end line really came as a suprise


  • Darkimagination
    October 23, 2005
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    Excellent

    Great write, I was fooled into thinking this was going to be a deep poem all the way and then you lightened the whole affair with the ending line. Great stuff and keep it up!!!


  • becks place
    October 23, 2005
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    LOL! Great write - very creative and well written. Not enough humor around here, so thanks for the smile!

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