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it's not because i still love you...

its not because i still love you...
or have any feelings that can relate,
but it is because i worry
want to know how you are doing
care
drugs are like a posion and she is like a pill
no phone call...
no excistance
no nothing
this is why i worry
not because i love[d] you, but because we were friends first
because you were there for me
and i was there for you
all those times
who will help you now?
who will you fall onto?
this is why i worry, this is why i care
i made a mistake today
of finding your old letters
of thinking of what i have heard...
...of what you have become...
this is why i worry
this is why i stay awake
this is why i still love you...
in a totally normal way <3

we were friends first
you talked to me first
lets try that again
so you can come back into existance
so you can come back to life
so i wont have to worry
so i wont have to care
see...
its not because i still love you, i never said i ever have...

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Written October 23rd, 2005

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  • ImplodingPurple
    March 14, 2006
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    i'm your friend!!!

    ohhhhhhhhhhh...awww....i know what this is...its good though...i thought i disapeared from here...this site...ha ha!!!! i am soooo mysterious!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • disappointed
    October 23, 2005
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    omg! I love this poem! I seriously about cried! this hit home for me! omg weird that I read this today of all days! ok I'd give you a better comment but now is not a good time and I'm about to cry so yeah later!


  • scythe
    October 23, 2005
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    wise

    a very bright text, it is in the existence of reality, this is so witty, at the same time wise, you bring food for my thought, i really find it interesting, it is very nice, it really exists in everyones thoughts,

    we the reader have a glimpse of the same as yours!
    these deserves an applause