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Strawberry Lips Of Wine

Strawberry lips of wine
So sweet and delicate
So lusciously delicious
And velvety soft
Tenderly traveling  
Over unmapped flesh
Savoring the essence  
Of passion's delight
Delving into flaming desires
Completely uninhibited
Riding a river  
Of mystical bliss
To heights far beyond
The stars stretch

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Written October 22nd, 2005

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  • smoking gun
    November 28, 2005
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    good write has flow,good rhythm,good language skills,
    thanks-lov-kirby
    Edited on Dec 16, 12:00 because ''.


  • ShaShay
    November 26, 2005
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    Very sweetly done. It showed a talent not given to many.Thank you for sharing.
    ~~~POO~~~


  • Celticmoon
    October 23, 2005
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    So glad you enjoyed it my dear...
    Perhaps next time I shall write of strawberries and cream


  • darell
    October 23, 2005
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    Flaming hot!

    Yesss! Book me a flight! I'm out of here. This was sensual
    and passionately delicious. The metaphors were delectably
    scrumptious and erotic. The imagery was scorching hot and
    very seductive. Boy of boy do I love "Strawberry Lips Of Wine!"
    KISS*


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 23, 2005
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    Lovely!

    Nice pen my friend, oouuuuu, lovely write!
    Thanks for sharing you, I enjoyed this!

    -Timothy

  • Celticmoon
    October 22, 2005
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    So glad you enjoyed this piece my dear. In all honesty I'm not sure where it came from it just sort of popped out.


  • Malabu
    October 22, 2005
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    what a steamy writing... moons....your still excited from the last time we spoke...LOL....this is grrrate......lovely thoughts expressed here with images to excite the heart to failure.....welcome back to AP sweetie.....im headed for a cold shower....
    Huggs
    Mal

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