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never forget again

I forgot to tell him I loved him. He died.

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My confession. It is one of the things that drive me I guess; and i will never forget again.
Written October 22nd, 2005

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  • individuality gold member
    October 16, 2006
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    a sad one liner here, i think many in the world will relate to this. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 5, 2006
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    WONDERFUL

    THAT IS POWERFUL. SO FEW WORDS - YET YOU ONLY NEED A FEW. THIS HIT HOME VERY MUCH INDEED. ALWAYS TELL THE ONES YOU LOVE, THAT YOU LOVE AND CARE FOR THEM. YOU JUST NEVER KNOW WHAT MAY BE IN STORE. THIS IS WHAT I WOULD CALL A 'WAKE-UP' CALL, TYPE OF PIECE.


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    March 9, 2006
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    that was really sad


  • RubberDuckyDestiny
    November 22, 2005
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    so powerful...i'm always scared somethign liek this will happend to me...so i tell him everynight....even if i'm mad at him...i say i love you. wonderful, this is good...


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    November 13, 2005
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    Such a powerful statement in so few words. Quite stark and shocking. Very well done.


  • Heartofacircle
    November 12, 2005
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    this is sad, but in spirit, I am sure he knows that you love him, thanks for sharing this, keep up the awesome poetry..


  • simply amazed
    October 24, 2005
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    sad

    that's terribly sad

    i'm so sorry.


  • Sarah957
    October 23, 2005
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    This must be so painful to live with! When my step-dad got in a motorcycle accident, I didn't visit him at the hospital. Everyone thought he'd be fine, and things between us had never been too good. He died, and that sticks with me as well.
    At least you've found a way to learn something from it,
    your comment "I'll never forget again" is haunting, but it leaves me with hope for you.

    Sarah


  • SoCiAlLy--ExCePtEd
    October 23, 2005
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    aww

    ~wow...that would make me freaking sad, but i know how it is. who is the he? this is really really sad, like i might cry sad....good luck..
    ~Ashes~

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