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Take You Back Home

My heart aches as I place a flower
upon your bed of eternal sleep.
A tear falls as I remember you
how you have become such a part of me.
You carved your spirit into my heart,
my mind,
and my soul.

When you departed
A piece of you stayed with me-
A constant reminder...a bit of hurt to tug at my heart.
Everyone says there is a gate to hell
somewhere on this Earth.
Well  then, I wonder, where is the gateway to heaven?

I will not rest until I find it.
And when I do, for I know you are resting there,
I will venture through it

and take you back home.

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Option #2
Written October 22nd, 2005

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    November 8, 2005
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    This is an awesome poem. It was really heart felt. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!

  • smileygurl
    November 4, 2005
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    This is a great poem, a lot of emotion, but you forgot to put the option you chose in your author's box.
    Thanks for entering my contest.


  • bookdragon
    October 24, 2005
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    Wonderful!