Your dead heart beats
and you can't see your wrong
so long
just leave, get out
and don't come back.
Solitary confinement
with a pen and paper for friends
when will it end
the ink runs across the page
like blood pours from an open wound
I can't move on
until you are gone.
sitting watching,
as hours go by
I want to die
I'm in a never ending nightmare
tell me how to escape
getting drugged up, fucked up
I can't go on.
I've got a date with disaster
my razorblade romance
getting dressed up, messed up
with blackened eyes
a fake disguise.
smiling on the outside
dying within
drowning in people
I want these demons to be gone
before I end up six feet under.
Author notes
Written October 22nd, 2005
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i love this poem especially the last verse ur a great writer
i reli lik the themes u write about
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Wow. Wish this really is a song. I do believe that you should maybe come up with some beats to this and send it here. Something of that sort. Either way, great write. Very emotional. Great flow, I agree with "w h e n". Good job, keep it up.
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Wow...I really liked this, well written and it reads so nicely! Good work!
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such a great flow! this is amazing, I as well would LOVE to hear it with the music! It would be one killer song! *chills* I love it! Great job!
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I saw this in an ad for the work, and I'm glad I took a look at it. If I remember correctly, you said it was a song..? Maybe I'm wrong, but if on the off chance I'm right, I would love to hear the music along with the lyrics. And if I'm wrong, I think it would sound great as a song
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