Dance one night
In mist of moon
Light shimmer
In whores lust
Brandy's nectar
On ruby
Lips bleed your
Name in drunken
Tube goblets
Vanish in your arms
Because our love is gone
Put chains on my heart
In eternity, crest
Part of a story
Not yet, flourish this night
Did not matter brushed
For nocturnal with you
Remnants has left me
Under pressure smiles
Your arms for more time
In my thoughts tonight
Staggering
Crossed her floor
Upon your
Serenade
A tango dance
Touch my heart
Glass passion
Her petal rose
Upon her
Does not declare, isolated in cupids with compassion
Author notes
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Written October 22nd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- s.t.r.i.p.p.e.d by Kansas June.
300 points, ended October 31, 2005, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I'm gave the sense of falling off a cliff, but jest got love the format and how this love smoulder in the smoke at a dance. Haley27
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oh. i * love * the format! everything just seemed so dizzy? and overflowing, somehow. this is stunning, and every word of it screams overdose even while beautiful. Great job, and good luck in the contest!
Edited on Oct 29, 1:40 p.m. because ''.
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