Just the look on your face
Can't stop the speed of my pace
Your eyes, so deep in thought
cut me in half, as I fought
Their's you and her
and all I am is just a blur
to that fragile mind
which happens to be blind
My heart that should belong
Is your one true song
that comes out of your voice
and having to be that choice
I'm nothing but a crystal
Who's been shot by that pistol
you held in your hand,
shattered into small piece's, like sand
Understand I only wanted the best
for you to be happy, and me depressed
As I say my last good-bye
I let that crimson tear fall and cry
Author notes
Ntohing special, just a poem I wrote.
Written October 22nd, 2005
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saddening piece, it has like a twist of the knife into my stomach, you painted your feelings out artistically very good..
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great
wow.....this is a really really good poem- you capture what everyone feels at one time or another and thats what its all about right?? good job- i love it -
wow this is so sad. good poem.
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