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I miss you

I have to say I miss
they way we used to be.
Carefree and silly.
We were honest with each other
and made each other laugh.

Some how our road ended,
silently fell apart.
And I know that the words
that need to be heard
will never be spoken.
Life has happened.
But still,
I have to say
I miss
you.

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Written October 22nd, 2005

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  • AMEgirly
    March 29, 2006
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    wow i can completey relate to this poem. i kno how u feel u rnt alone! well awesome job and keep it up! hang in there!


  • BrokenDownHeart
    October 22, 2005
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    it's to you


  • Mandy Pants
    October 22, 2005
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    who is this to?


  • lostsouls12
    October 22, 2005
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    i know how that feels. and its a feeling that never had happend in the first place. i relate to this piece so much. keep up the good job