Halloween
Different faces
in all of places
walking through the street.
TRICK-OR-TREAT!
that's what they say when they come to the door,
and get what they came here for,
Bag full of goodies to stuff their face,
turning the candy into paste,
one by one it disappears
in their dreams it reappears,
and ghouls and goblins and witches and ghosts
raise their glasses to make a toast,
to the HAPPIEST HALLOWEEN EVER!!!!!!!
Author notes
HAHHA I WAS BORED AND I LOVE HALLOWEEN!
Written October 22nd, 2005
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thanx kk i tried...... no actually i was fixin to go to bed! lol love ya lots happie b-day in tree days lol ( i meant to spell it that way!)
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wow sonja..this is actually good! it rhymed well and the flow was great...u really did a great ob on this...best one yet!!!
toodles
xoxox
kayla -
This was pretty alright, I suppose. There were a lot of typos, and seeing as how I'm sure a horrid person / Grammar Nazi, I shall now point them out for you.
that's what the say when they come to the door,
I believe it should read: that's what THEY say when they come to the door,
Bag full of goodies to stuff there face,
I believe is should read: Bag full of goodies to stuff THEIR face,
in there dreams it reappears,
I believe it should be: in THEIR dreams it reappears,
raises their glasses to make a toast,
I believe it should be: RAISE their glasses to make a toast,
Mm'hmm. That's all the grammar mistakes I found. There are more.. But.. Yes. I'll just let you think over these. Mm'hmm. -
Halloween is my favi holiday
you said it all! i really liked this poem, keep em' comin'
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I really like this poem. I find it hart to rhyme so I think you did a double good job on it. I really like this part:
"Bag full of goodies to stuff there face,
turning the candy into paste,"
I can really relate to that part.
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well at least i liked this poem! i guess no one else did! i applaud it
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