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Our Burning and Flaming Inferno

The melting heart
Creates the fire
Which from I shall not part
Which burns desire

Sensuous touch
And caressing fingers
Do move in passionate brush
Forever senses linger

The fire burning in my loins
Is also in my heart and soul
Whilst it may extinguish in the groin
In my heat it will forever grow

Forever and eternity, too
For I promise to hold, care and trust
And create an ever-burning lust,
Because I love you.

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Written October 22nd, 2005

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  • FifthDove
    October 22, 2005
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    Do you have “fans” for your readers to use as we are reading this?
    A very, very sensual write, the flow is gentle and flows quite nicely. Nice penning Thank you so much for sharing your words with all of us here. I would like to Welcome you to the site - If you have any questions or if I can be of any assistance please don't hesitate to send me or any greeter an IM.
    Nice to read you ♥FifthD♥ve♥


  • zimzam
    October 22, 2005
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    beautifully expressed, nice sensation created, good write pal, you captured me with words