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Pain

Pain is all I feel now.
Not necessarily physical
most mostly emotional.
It's there, but does
anyone notice?

I try to hide it
the best that I can,
but people seem to notice
that something's wrong even though
I say that everything's fine.

Pain.  One of those
four letter words
that no one ever
wants to hear.
I wonder why.

Could it be because
it proves that you
can't handle everything
thrown your way?
Maybe it's not.

We ALL have pain
in our lives,
but why do
some people's seem
worse than others?

Pain isn't a sign
of weakness like
so many people think.
It's a sign a strength,
and that's why we ALL experience it.

Author notes

Hey everyone.  I thought that it was about time that I posted a new poem.  I wrote this around the time that my brother Chris died.  So yea.
Written October 21st, 2005

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  • inspiteofangels3
    January 17, 2006
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    wow, wonderful.
    I would say how wonderful it was if I didnt have to go catch the bus

    <3

  • freakaboutfrosty
    October 24, 2005
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    i love it, yet i hate it. i wish it was never written if it helped the past change. luv you.

  • evolotevil
    October 23, 2005
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    Krishell!!!! This is sooooooo effin awesome!!!! I wish I could write like this, but sadly I lack your skill. This is amazing, keep writing! <3 ya!

  • imminentaccident
    October 23, 2005
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    damn...you can write a poem this strong...and post it...that's just a-bloomin-mazing.Wow...that is all I can say.Keep your head up,chick...you are awesome.


  • horsinaround
    October 22, 2005
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    luv u!

    yay! shelley's finally posted a new poem!! woooohoooo! lol. well, babe, i love this poem! i know that EVERYONE will be able to relate to it because everyone, as you said, experiences pain. i can't even imagine how hard it's been for you, but i just want you to know that i respect you so much for coping with it & i am always here for you. as you said, pain is a sign of strength, and no one who experiences it is alone. great write! keep posting!


  • Aroarathebloody
    October 21, 2005
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    i loved it

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