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a shadows gift

A SHADOWS GIFT



Can a shadow move
across the sky
While the sun is bright
and rising high?
I dare not contemplate
the dark of the light
the love in my hate
the fear that I fight
If I come to acknowledge
all that is bad
Must I forget all that's good
the innocence I had?
Both light and dark
can corrupt my soul
but it's what I believe in
that can never be stole

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Written October 21st, 2005

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  • sensually adept
    December 21, 2005
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    I think you've done a GREAT job with this piece !! Just wonderful to read !! Great insight for one so young in this life .... You conyain Awesome Talent , keep using it !! Thank you for the read , have a nice day . dan


  • Ruby Petal
    October 31, 2005
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    GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

    Pretty good. I especially like these lines,

    'Can a shadow move
    across the sky
    While the sun is bright
    and rising high?'

    I luv them lines!! Great rite and keep it up!!

    xmazx
    (MaryAnn)