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Rhiannon (Acrostic)

Reflect upon her beauty deep,
haunting your very soul-
imaginary as she may seem;
a goddess born of beauty and light
no other could ever possess.
Never again will you come upon
one so enchanted and immaculate,
nonpareil and angelic, so beloved.

Author notes

An acrostic about Rhiannon-the meaning of which is goddess. I want to name my daughter either Rhiannon or Rhyanna, when I have one that is. hehe
Written October 20th, 2005

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  • countrybabe gold member
    September 3, 2006
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    Good Luck

    Pretty name. Thank you for your entry and good luck.


  • Carpe Noctem
    October 28, 2005
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    Thank you very much!!!


  • October 28, 2005
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    A very pretty name, along with a very pretty poem, the write was majestic and sweet. Great job and good luck in the contest!

  • Carpe Noctem
    October 24, 2005
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    hehe Yes we are.


  • Roo Rage
    October 23, 2005
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    I know!! I love my name, lol. Ooh, Miracle is sucha pretty name!! God, we're soo kewl. Anytime


  • Carpe Noctem
    October 21, 2005
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    Wow, I'm envious! That's an awesome name. I like my name pretty well, too, given it's pretty rare as well (Miracle), but that name is just.....cool. Thanks very much for the comment and applause!

  • Carpe Noctem
    October 21, 2005
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    Thanks very much!


  • Roo Rage
    October 21, 2005
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    omG, my name's Rhiannon!!! Yay, thas soooo kewl, lol. name yur daughter Rhiannon, it's sucha pretty name (if I say so myself) Anywhos, this I really like this write, not jus because it's about me, lol. jp. It's short and cute. Keep it up!

    </3.Demon

  • fairmaiden1
    October 21, 2005
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    Very beautiful write. Yes I love that name to.

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