It is all around me
Can I still breathe?
Life is on me
Can’t anyone see?
I will die if I am not saved
No one cares
For me this day.
No one ever will
Is all I have to say
Leave me alone
Go and be gone
No one understands me
And no one ever will
I will be gone
So don’t worry for real
I don’t care anymore
No one understands me
I hate the world
It will never know
The way I am truly
Because I will be gone
Tomorrow if so
It is my wish
To leave you all behind
And find some one else
Who can help me
Get life off of me
So I don’t suffocate
From the way you all want me to be.
Author notes
Things I say have a deeper meaning on what you think. All my poems are about how I feel, and what I am like. NEVER judge anyone by what you read about them or have heard. Figure it out for yourself. Remember, things are not always as they appear.
Written October 21st, 2005
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this is really deep and emotional. nice write and good luck
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I hate the world too don't feel bad hone we all do it is just a long picture book we make up your own words (lol) witch we really do that my friend is the scary thing
suffocate me is my favorite line
becauses it isn't over used like breaking down or something like that well i really like this write keep up the good work
peace
tasha -
really good
this is a really good poem. i really understand what you are trying to say. this was a really good read!
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