Inner Beauty (Quainzaine)
Beauty is within us all.
Is yours shining through?
Feel its glow?
Dee Garner
© October 21, 2005
Author notes
My first attempt at Quainzaine
7/5/3
The first line makes a statement, next two lines ask a question related to the statement.
Written October 21st, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Wanted Quainzaine Form Poems by Vickie J.
300 points, ended October 25, 2005, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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My beauty is shining,
is yours?
I think yours is too,
through your writes,
you are just too amazing
for words.
..Simply Me♥ -
very good
very good. inside is where it matters and outside does not matter at all to me. inner beauty lasts. almost similiar what i wrote my poem, "Inner Beauty". -
First one, eh!
I just learned of Quainzaine
Write quatrains in the main
I have much to gain
One learns here; that's plain
Tiki Cat -
this a pretty description.. and congrats as well, Linda
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Congratulations on winning bronze. Nice write.
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This is way cool!!! Thanks for a great entry!~vj
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hmm interesting form! and the poem is really nice-brief but asks questions for which the readers have to think a lot about!
well done!!!Good Luck!
~~~ille -
Dee well done some of us struggle with seeing that
beauty more then others you do glow in our hearts.
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nice quainzaine Dee, it is very good for a first attempt also
good luck in this cool contest
best wishes as always
-Cool Oasis-
Edited on Oct 21, 4:23 p.m. because ''.
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