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lets rewrite it

I'm afraid of what might happen
   but life is once and you cant give up
we took a chance and it was wrong
   and i never hear the radio play our song

When I'm alone and feeling down
   You were normally the one to steal my frown
But now we both need someone to hold
   But neither of us are feeling that bold

Why this would happen i do not know
   but i can never let my pain for it show
i need to be strong and have faith
   so we can get through life's sorrowful maze

Together forever i will always say.
   so don't ever let the day come when you walk away
Stand by my side and help me through
   Cause now is the time when i really need you

                    and,

I'm afraid of what might happen
   but life is once and we can't give up
We took our chance and it was wrong
   So lets rewrite our own brand new song


-kitty

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Written October 21st, 2005

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  • Def Poet 42o
    October 21, 2005
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    Very Cool poem kitty Kat,I liked it,Holla at ur Homie...
    Love
    .Chris.