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Done

My deed has started
Yet not fulfilled
Each cut was remembrance
Memories lost
I was never good enough
And will never be
Don't miss me
But this is my goodbye

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Written October 3rd, 2005

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  • capricornpoet
    December 6, 2005
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    in the darkness its always alone

    dark, terminal , sad , is anybody listening,no echo only your heart ..


  • So-Alone
    December 3, 2005
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    i like it gr8t job short but meaningful! gr8t job!!
    ~Emily


  • requiempoet gold member
    October 22, 2005
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    for an older poem..it certinly has potential