It was only a random act
hit or miss you could say
not caring what I did
settling for pot luck today
I would chose without care
being slipshod in my choice
settling for just anything
in a mild mannered voice
Give me this or give me that
asking in a haphazard way
pick and chose at random
it won't matter what you say
No definite plan or order
depending just on chance
no thought of any reason
not left to circumstance
So spin the wheel around
see where life takes you
not caring where it lands
is such a foolish thing to do
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I read Lemons by sharcusbluemoon
The Life Of Tim by Sharcu
Written October 21st, 2005
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You sure made me smile
This is such a great poem which sure makes the reader laugh out loud... Irony is it's the truth by which many at times we all live - live by chance, I sure do a lot
it's funny how humor shows the face of reality & people accept it with grace... so it's true, it's not what you say but how you say it is more important... Thanks for making me smile & we all need smiles everyday... great write which only a sweetheart like you is capable of writing for your writings show your sweet character.... take care my dear Minoo
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Thank you for the nice comment Michael.
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Thank you Kelsy for the nice comment. I always appreciate it. How are you? I do hope all is okay. Take care, Sandy
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Very insightfull, particularly the ending! Well done. -Michael
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LOL. Yes Random. I love it. The rhyming was perfect and there was no force *like I even know what they mean by rhyme was forced lol just thought I would randomly funny* I'm so happy for a random poem. It really does suit the option for randomosity. Thanks a lot for entereing and good luck in the contest.
Kelsy
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Thank you for the wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy
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Great poem sandygram, and cool picture too, nice one, i wish you the best of luck in the contest
best wishes as always
-Cool Oasis-
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Ah thank you so much for the nice comment. It is always appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Wow, awesome poem.
I really didn't expect anything like this in our contest, very good job. Rhyming and flow were very good (as usual from you). It fits the random choice because it always ends up being a random decision by the spin of a wheel. Great job that was unexpectant. Good luck in the contest.
--Tim
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