Fight for something if it is worth fighting for
Or maybe we should run some place that everybody else forgot
Because our lives are twisted up in knots
And you know we can't find a way out
It won't do us any good to scream and shout
we're stuck with our mistakes and there's no turning back
It's funny how once i got you this is all i thought my life lacked
But now that it is happening i am scared out of my mind
and I'm dying inside because i feel that you have left me behind
I gave you all my heart and soul, let you love me in every way
But now tears are all i shed every night and day
I feel so alone cause you are not here to hold me tight
Tell me that everything will be alright
Let me know i am not alone tonight
Tell me we are going to fight for what is right.
Kaitlin Moore
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Written October 21st, 2005
A contest entry
- Break ups and broken hearts by Rachelbooth.
300 points, ended November 15, 2005, 39 entries
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wozers this is a REALLY GOOD poem i mean u really put alot of emotion in to it and i felt that emotion just by reading it good write
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Great job. I loved it. It had alot of emotions in it and i don't know exactly how to word it. All i can say is great job.
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This is a really good poem, i appreaciate the entry to the contest, It is really very good. Don't forget to comment on some of my work other wise you won't be considered for the trophy
Thank you
Rachel -
Beautiful Poem,Come here (Big HUG)(kiss on the Cheak)I hope u will feel better Love ya.:-*
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YEAH!!!
awesomejob
just to let you know i'm clapping
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ANd ahhhhhh at the same time
keep up the good work
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