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Played

Its such a shame after all this time
We've managed to fall apart
Never did I think
That something like that would start

You told me that you loved me,
You told me that you cared
And right when I got to believing you
You left me standing there

You walked up to me with him
Sweetly holding hands
Looked me in the eye
And I knew it was coming right then

You said that it was better
To leave it all behind
Than to live like this forever
Always broken inside

Its so hard to let go
After all this time
What do you do when everything you had
Turned out to be a lie

Im sorry that you felt that way
You played me for the fool
Broke me down and left me there
And now this pain will rule

Tears fall like rain drops
Wasted on my past
I should have known something so good
Could never really last

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Written October 21st, 2005

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  • xxunloved07xx
    October 25, 2005
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    wow i loved this poem i can totally relate to this my ex ditched me for my best friends sister and it hurt really bad and still does so i know where your coming from and im sooo sorry you have to go through this i hope things work out...your a great writer keep up the great work and thanks for sharing...

    ~*!Heather!*~

  • Hidden Angel
    October 21, 2005
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    this is such a great piece! it's filled with so much emotion and it flows well. i hope that it's not true but if it is im sorry that you have go through all this pain great job.

    Hidden Angel