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Simply Irresistable

Your feelings for me is which you wish you could be forever you see what you could of you'll never have I'm so sad that my soul hurt with out you I'm really mad at myself for thinking of you in a way that I could care and you thought me not trusting you want fair now your needing me so bad and you realized how madly in love you are with me
               BUT WHAT YOU DONT SEE IS THAT LOVE ISN'T A
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Written October 21st, 2005

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  • Sandygram
    November 3, 2005
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    This was an emotional write. So many times we don't realize what someone means to us until they disappear from our lives. This was a terrific write to read. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Grma.

  • Twiztid Tweek420
    November 2, 2005
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    your right it isnt a game and it can hurt someone without you even saying anything


  • aRdNeK
    October 21, 2005
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    Don't know if you're aware, but you posted this on here twice. hehe I'm bored so I thought I might as well let you know.