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Stabbed


                                           Drive a knife
                                           Into my back
                                           Twist until it breaks.
                                           Over and over
                                           Again and Again
                                           I make the same mistake.
                                           I let you near
                                           I let you in
                                           Deep into my mind.
                                           I cant trust
                                           I cant love
                                           I want to leave it all behind.

Author notes

This how i feel write now. Excuse the slight change in my mess of poems and stories. i was writing my series but this is how i feel at the moment!
Written October 20th, 2005

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  • Bruised.Roses
    October 21, 2005
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    wow short but sweet it's powerfull and deep i loved it!


  • care bear freak
    October 21, 2005
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    THis one is short, but sweet. Really emotional and right to the point. Kinda sounds really harsh and really quick death..Not drawn out hurt like most. Good poem, Good job

    ~Amber

  • Taros
    October 20, 2005
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    this is very sad and yet I know the pain you speak. Also this sounds like a song if you give it the right tunes.