Come to me she whispered as I meditated into my own world of illusions. Her dark yet highlighted hair shone above her smile of pink and eyes of stars that led me her direction; and yet still all I could see was her face as it was showing peace and truth of what lies ahead.
She danced with me in motions only made for lovers in a lilac gown and I in a tuxedo to match by shades of black. The music was calming and the dancing was not the usual dances from a ball room hall, instead we floated and gluided across the floor for a dream instead.
I lofted her and dipped her as she would gaze into mine eyes as though guiding me into the steps to keep us entangled within our hearts; golden memories and silver reflections in a white surrounding with the floor in purest form for even a beginner to be a novice in strife.
And yet the songs had to end as she lead me away whispering again for me to follow her for the love I had been so desperatly dreaming about in my meditation and as I did it was then I had realized she was and is my true love, my peace and tranquility; for she is my life!
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Written October 20th, 2005
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Beautifully written and exquisitely descriptive. One could almost hear the music and be drawn into the dance...Truly what fairy tales and dreams are made of...only once in a lifetime.
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Red Red Rose - yes indeed I now see some words that lost a few letters so I will work on this and thank you for the comment. I hope all is fair with you and hope to see you online sometime.
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Red-Angel ; Thank you for your comment, that means the write was what I intended it to be. I wrote it for a very special lady in my life of whom I desire to hold and dance with in this manner. Romance is such an important part of life to me and she has given it to it's fullest.
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Awesome write! This is one of my favorites. I can see the dancers on the floor and the strong descriptions of the woman makes me see her in my mind as well. And it's so romantic! Great job! Keep up the amazing work!
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