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Bang

She swims through seas of lies
Nearly drowning in his deceit
And every night she yells & cries
And feels so incomplete

So alone in her own room
Feeling lost & useless
Dwelling in her doom
Everything is hopeless

Holding the gun in her hand
As her mind goes blank
For years, this was planned
And she has her father to thank

She stands with the gun to her head
Taking a deep breath
How she wishes she were dead
As she dwells on her death

*bang*

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Written October 20th, 2005

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