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I Long....

I long to look into your eyes and tell you

"I love you"

The only problem is

[you don't love me back]

My heart aches when I think of you

Am I, or can I be, your anything?

I long for your kiss upon my lips...

The sweet tenderness of your essence upon mine

I long for your touch to caress me, to feel your hands glide upon me softly

I long for you to be mine

f.o.r.e.v.e.r.a.n.d.a.l.w.a.y.s

Then reality hits me..

[I'll never be good enough for you.]

Author notes

Boy problems again. I'm in love with a friend, who I guess thinks I'm annoying, and he has a girlfriend. He just found out that I care about him so much yesterday. I don't knwo what to do. Perhaps I should show him this poem? Well in my myspace theres a section with things about him in it. Check it out if you'd like. www.myspace.com/_principessa_
Written October 20th, 2005

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  • Punjabi Putter
    June 26, 2006
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    my thoughts and your pen??

    Great write, I am a little bit jealous, could be from me, just kidding.