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A healing heart has took the pain

A  healing heart has took the pain

      Nothing's quite the same

         And everthing's pretty difficult

      as if everything's drifting away...

    Could it all be impossible?

      Breakable and hateable?

         I feel no rage, distraction, or being,

     ...as I slowly drift away...

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Written October 20th, 2005

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  • October 20, 2005
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    AWESOME

    wow, i really like this one, it has so much emotion and its very touching! I dig it alot!!! i write like that you should read some of mine sometime! well you did a really really really god job on this peice of work!!! AWESOME JOB, keep it up
    -Marissa