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Forever and Today

I'm in love with two different guys
Both so special in their ways
One I've known my entire life
The other I just met today

He's the perfect dream for me
Tall, dark, and handsome is he
But his blackest eyes reflect not I
But in the eyes of another they lie

He's not the cutest, not that tall
But the greatest personality of all
Reddish brown hair and brown eyes
He knows me better than I know myself

Today doesn't love me anymore
Forever hasn't yet
Today will forget tomorrow
I will never forget today nor forever

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Written October 20th, 2005

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  • prototype05
    October 24, 2005
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    great

    talk about being in between a rock and a hard place naw just playing but this was a nice one i liked it alot cause now im in the same situation

  • Sweet Lilith
    October 20, 2005
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    well... to be honest with you, I wrote this poem quite a while ago... call love fickle, but I'm not in love with either of them anymore (thank God.) Thanks for the comment!


  • LilMissLoser
    October 20, 2005
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    wow this is really good....its an amazing write and its like something i've never read but always heard about...this has happened to some of my friends before...they've fallen in love with two people...great write
    ~katie~

  • Aliensnow
    October 20, 2005
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    mmm, really intruguing, kind of makes you think doesn't it? well done