my chair rests on broken legs but still it bears the weight
my life one big blur thoughts propelled by fate
but you spread your arms and welcome me inside
your words are my sanctuary giving me room to hide
i know i may seem stupid all the fights ive started
i just cant bear the thought of your heart departed
sometimes i try to numb the pain stars shine in my blood
but now there is you, your love is like a flood
sweeping me away from this, making me forget
this is my real life not a wall ive hit
and my heart beats faster at even little thoughts of you
i know this for certain, that our love is true
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Author notes
thanks for reading my stuff guys, this one is about the most amazing girl in the world...
Written October 20th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love Inspiration by Krispy Kreme.
300 points, ended January 8, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Best Three Pre-writes by piccola.
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I love the metaphor here. well written and easily understood what I need in poetry that I read. Personally, I need a cozy sofa because a mere chair can never bear the weight I bring to the table. thank you for entering
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Nice piece! Very lovely, yet beautiful and sweet. She must be someone
... Hope all goes well, and thank you for entering my contest good luck
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this is really lovely, and probably much better than the last one on which i commented written by you; here i see very good rhyming and lovely poetry over all... and it seems you write poems about one girl only, and isee all your topics for poems are related to your love... so may be since i am a bit small, its not really my taste, but this one i liked, even after the topic not being my taste!!!
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thanks alot, one of those late at night really tired but have to write thing...
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This is so sweet and romantic. Really made me smile. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!
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