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what is the limit?

It can pretty hard,
if you know what I mean,
and I'm the wettest guy,
you've ever, ever seen.

I'm getting pretty hot,
can never get enough,
I like to play it dirty,
sometimes a little rough.

I want it so bad,
I want to be satisfied,
I want to do things,


Now don't get the wrong idea,
you may be on the wrong track,
but what do you think of,
when I mention the sack ?

A bum can be down,
a prick can be sore,
a life being a scrubber,
can be a bit of a chore.

Now don't get misled,
these words are only in jest,
and as far as girl friends go,
well love, you're the best.

And as far as life goes,
let us both be in it.
How far can we go ? I reckon
The Skye Is The Limit !

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Written October 19th, 2005

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  • thongqueen1569
    November 4, 2005
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    cool

    I Love this poem. It relates to alot

  • Unspoken Thoughts
    October 19, 2005
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    This is cute...the begging of it kind of threw me off but i think that this is really funny though. Good job! I can honestly say that I havent heard of a poem like this one..keep writing more...love ash