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Love from the stars



                        MY DAUGHTER,CAN YOU SEE ME,
                        I'M RIGHT BEHIND THIS STAR,
                        I'M SORRY I HADN'T SAID I LOVE YOU,
                        BEFORE I CAME THIS FAR.

                        I KNOW SOMEHOW YOU KNEW IT,
                        IT WAS ALWAYS HARD TO SAY THE WORDS,
                        BUT DEEP INSIDE YOU FELT IT,
                        BEFORE I CLIMBED THOSE STAIRS.  

                        AND JUST IN CASE YOU NEED A REMINDER,
                        THAT I TRULY CARED,
                        JUST LOOK AT THAT BRIGHT TWINKLING STAR,
                        I'm RIGHT ABOVE THE STAIRS!!  
                                                       

                                               love forever.
                                               from DAD,
                                               THROUGH MOM





Author notes

NEVER LET THE TIME GO BY TO SAY I LOVE YOU TO SOMEONE SPECIAL  YOU MAY NEVER HAVE THE CHANCE AGAIN.
Written October 19th, 2005

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  • Virginia Logsdon
    March 23
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    Very touchng! Weould always let those we love know that we love them!

    This evoked great feeling in me.


  • Bertie
    March 18, 2006
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    great poem sis, mom, dad and your father all knew of the love you felt for them as well as i feel your love for me and i hope you feel my love for you. They are looking down from behind the stairs above the stars and they are very proud to call you their daughter.
    love ya


  • Slanted fears
    October 19, 2005
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    Its true, but so many people take advatage of it not realizing at any moment they may not be given that second chance to express themselves. Whether it be a parent and a child or two lovers, or even just friends don't shy out of any moment. This was a breath taking piece and so emotional, just amazing, keep up the good work.