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You Came from the Stars, They Say

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You came from the stars they say
where you dwelled
and you rained down upon me like nature.
You picked up the scattered pieces that were once me
and slowly brought me out of my slumber.

 

 

 

On your lips you held our first kiss,
and I remain there long, wondering, when and if time would ever come
and bring us there...
You held my heart in your many messages
that stirred the swirling earth beneath me
and inflamed my passionate breath…

 

 

 

Time.
We are facing each other,
our fingers touch through the space...
we are drawn closer,
slowly and deliberately
into a long, soft embrace.

 

 

 

The meadows dance
and press us closer together,
we do not resist
in knowing anticipation
of our first kiss...

 

 

 

Your heart beats new life
into your soft lips,
we are pulsing, the two of us,
pulsing...

 

 

 

At last our hot breath mingles
creating a new, sensational love!
The joys and sorrows
of an entire lifetime rush by
with the leaves
caught in a whirlwind
as our searing breath, triumphant,
lingers on our long, first kiss...
and our hands explore
and fade away
into the deep recesses of the mind...

 

 

 

No thoughts of ending it,
I am yours
this is the moment long awaited...
never will there be another
like this between us, our first kiss,
what will become familiar
is still exciting and yet unknown... 
stirring our passions with every little nuance,
full of fresh, unanticipated sensations
surprising every muscle and every curve,
reverberating through two who are locked in a new love
so close, for the first time,
in a long, first kiss...

 

 

 

The sun, the moon, the stars
are within you,
and accept my love.
You share them with me
and here they are captured, between us,
lingering through our first kiss
and on into the beginning of many promises...

 

 

 

I only have one life here
and the stars have spoken-
it will be with you.
This long, first kiss has sealed it.
What more could there be,
I ask?

 

 

 

The stars speak again,
and reveal that I, too,
am from the stars...
Naked, I was thrust upon this earth,
where you found me
and covered me in your love,
and my love for you gradually grew
bringing us to this long awaited moment...

 

 

 

I now return it sevenfold during our enduring, first kiss.
We soar on silver wings among the silver stars
into a golden age of love.
The birds have learned to sing,
and the earth has taken its place in the universe
with a newfound purpose,
and it all began here, with our long, first kiss.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Written October 18th, 2005

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  • Gogetalife
    October 24, 2005
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    This was so romantic Wayne..what a dreamy kiss..very passionate , lovely poem..i like your imagery here..you sound like you just let your pen go so free and I like that..great background as well..added little spice to this beautiful poem thank you for joining my contest..good luck..


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 22, 2005
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    Passion is in the air,sky and the person who is writing, nice poem and smiled as I read each line then paragraph, romantic and searching the atmosphere for the dynamics..great job .. keep penning Linda


  • Celticmoon
    October 20, 2005
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    Well I must say your portrayal of such a first kiss is a remarkable one to say the least. The intensity within the words of this write linger on long after you have completed your visiual flight of passion and ecstasy branding an astonishing image of the most perfect first kiss I have ever had the pleasure and honor of partaking in. You leave your readers breathless with this kiss to which I am certain that was the intent.

    A true masterpiece of loving perfection!


    Blessings
    Moon
    Edited on Oct 21, 9:38 because ''.


  • wbiro gold member
    October 20, 2005
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    Well, thanks for the comment, James, and as for the bite, that will teach you to try and kiss your reflection in the mirror! lol That was actually my first idea here, but Ms. Jewel protested- she didn't want silliness, of which she knows I abound in...!


  • James R
    October 20, 2005
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    Great write wish my first kiss had of been like this but it was terrible i still have a swollen lip form the bite. Lol lovely write thank you for shareing it.


  • wbiro gold member
    October 20, 2005
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    Yummy... yes, good word for it! glad you enjoyed my 'first kiss'!


  • wbiro gold member
    October 20, 2005
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    thanks, suseann, glad you liked my 'first kiss'!


  • whispersoftly
    October 20, 2005
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    wow Mr Wbiro this is amazing some beatiful writing here soft and sensual and romantic. The metaphores are wonderful. Very sensual write from you,
    The meadow dances
    and presses us closer together,
    we do not resist
    in knowing anticipation...

    this stanza is just yummy it sums everything up about being together, that the anticipation and excitement is the best part of being together well done this is beautiful xx Ms Softly xx



  • suseann
    October 20, 2005
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    It's true.That first kiss from the one and only,your in fear of letting it end because one grand love of your life might be somehow lost forever changed.This was a great write!~~Suseann


  • wbiro gold member
    October 19, 2005
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    glad you liked my first kiss/fantasy piece, Melissa! I'm still tinkering with it however!

  • wbiro gold member
    October 19, 2005
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    Thank you, Angela... even though your comment was positive, I went back with a critical eye, and found things that needed improving! (the graphics for one!) You are a spur in the side of this horse!


  • imonlyme7
    October 19, 2005
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    This is a very powerful poem, Wonderful poem here my friend!

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    October 19, 2005
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    This is inspiring, so beautiful and uplifting - full of love and a soft romance, sensual and pretty all at the same time. I read this last night but was too tired to remark and to read again today when I am not tired - breathtaking!

    Melissa


  • SexyAngel0418
    October 19, 2005
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    WOW AP Dad!!! This is a very powerful write!!! It is very beautiful!!! !YOu did a great job on this one!!! Keep up the good work!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    October 19, 2005
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    Wow!!! I loved this, very romantic and very erotic without the vileness of it. Very well written with great imagery and I love the background and having it in space. This kept my attention and almost made me wish I was there. Great write with great feeling and wonderful expression of love and how it can be expressed.

  • nolonger
    October 19, 2005
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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 19, 2005
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    '...You picked up the scattered pieces that were once me
    and slowly brought me out of my slumber...' This is beautiful, Wayne...very serene & passionate, my Friend...quite lovely & loving...well done...IM AJ & tell her what you did...If nothing else, perhaps she'll allow you to delete this posting & enter it anew...Just add (contest entry) after the title so it will allow you to post it again...Wel done, indeed... Wanda

  • wbiro gold member
    October 19, 2005
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    Why, that was beautiful, mum! This one? Pure imagination... I considered a collaborator, but I am weary! I did write it for Arabian Jewel's 'First Kiss' contest... and I see once again I failed to enter the contest I wrote a piece for!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 19, 2005
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    strolling hand in hand
    through shadowy mist
    begging with the eyes
    for that very first kiss

    passion consumes
    when eyes first meet
    lips are pursed and
    craving their feast

    knees grow weak from
    touches, soft and tender
    as passions flow free
    with a kiss to remember

    First kisses... they are at times long in coming because of that nervous hesitency but once they do... they are remembered forever. Whomever this was intended for is very lucky. You did a sweet job here.
    ♥ Touchof1der Mum


  • wbiro gold member
    October 18, 2005
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    thanks for the comment, Providence! I'll be struggling with this one for a while longer!


  • Providence
    October 18, 2005
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    This whispers of human and divine Love!
    Marvelous!

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