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Hope was wasting

Hope was wasting
This time you speak of
The chaotic wind of internal freeze
Bled through your veins like warm desolation
What was this suppose to breathe?

I thought you were forgetting
The dead souls that you couldn't feed
I wanted the cold wind to hit you
I wanted you to receive.....

A message of breaching
Unknown contracts unworthly decieved
The ball and chains wear down the
Broken fractures
Downfall and backwards now..
The bones are bleached

I thought you were forgetting
The dead souls that you couldn't feed
I wanted the cold wind to hit you
I wanted you to receive.....
I thought you were forgetting
The dead souls that you couldn't feed
I wanted the cold wind to hit you
I wanted you to receive.....

An understanded statement of confusion unwakened
A leash on what happens, our collared freedom



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Written October 18th, 2005

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